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* At the end of the episode, [[TheWorldIsJustAwesome the Doctor, Ruby, Mundy, and Splice look over the peaceful skies...]] for about two minutes, before the Doctor abruptly drags Ruby away, saying they've wasted enough time there already.
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--> Ruby: Why does a land mine have lights on it?
--> The Doctor: Oh... capitalism. Flashy lights play well in a showroom. Modern warfare - death by salesman.
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--> The Doctor: It's vacuum drones, that's all. Hoovering up the smoke, so that nobody can choke to death before [[DeadpanSnarker they are safely shot]].
--> The Doctor: Oh... capitalism. Flashy lights play well in a showroom. Modern warfare - death by salesman.
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--> The Doctor: It's vacuum drones, that's all. Hoovering up the smoke, so that nobody can choke to death before [[DeadpanSnarker they are safely shot]].
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--> Ruby: '''Ruby''': Why does a land mine have lights on it?
--> The Doctor:it?\\
'''The Doctor''': Oh... capitalism. Flashy lights play well in a showroom. Modern warfare - death bysalesman.
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'''The Doctor''': It's vacuum drones, that's all. Hoovering up the smoke, so that nobody can choke to death before [[DeadpanSnarker they are safely shot]].
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'''The Doctor''': It's vacuum drones, that's all. Hoovering up the smoke, so that nobody can choke to death before [[DeadpanSnarker they are safely shot]].
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--> Ruby: Not that long, babes. You're standing on a land mine.
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--> Ruby: '''Ruby''': Not that long, babes. You're standing on a land mine.mine.
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* Ruby's [[GallowsHumor Gallows Humor]] at The Doctor's expense, when he promises to be cross with her for a long time if they survive the gambit to trick the landmines sensor.
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* Ruby's [[GallowsHumor Gallows Humor]] at The Doctor's expense, when he promises to be cross with her for a long time if they survive the gambit to trick the landmines landmine's sensor.
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* Ruby's [[GallowsHumor Gallows Humor]] at The Doctor's expense, when he promises to be cross with her for a long time if they survive.
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* Ruby's [[GallowsHumor Gallows Humor]] at The Doctor's expense, when he promises to be cross with her for a long time if they survive. survive the gambit to trick the landmines sensor.
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--> The Doctor: It's vacuum drones, that's all. Hoovering up the smoke, so that nobody can choke to death before [[DeadpanSnarker they are safely shot]].
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--> The Doctor: It's vacuum drones, that's all. Hoovering up the smoke, so that nobody can choke to death before [[DeadpanSnarker they are safely shot]].shot]].
* Ruby's [[GallowsHumor Gallows Humor]] at The Doctor's expense, when he promises to be cross with her for a long time if they survive.
--> Ruby: Not that long, babes. You're standing on a land mine.
* Ruby's [[GallowsHumor Gallows Humor]] at The Doctor's expense, when he promises to be cross with her for a long time if they survive.
--> Ruby: Not that long, babes. You're standing on a land mine.
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* The StylisticSuck of the alternate Abbey Road Studios where all the music has been stolen by Maestro. Music/TheBeatles sing about a dog, Cilla Black sings a generic love song, and an orchestra plays a ''horrifically'' dissonant rendition of "Three Blind Mice".
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* The StylisticSuck of the alternate Abbey EMI/Abbey Road Studios Studios, where all the music has been stolen by Maestro. Music/TheBeatles sing about a dog, Cilla Black sings a generic love song, and an orchestra plays a ''horrifically'' dissonant rendition of "Three Blind Mice".
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* Just because The Doctor is standing on a [[spoiler: planet destroying]] land mine, doesn't mean he will pass on any opportunity to snark on [[BigBad Villengard's]] inhumane business practises.
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* Just because The Doctor is standing on a [[spoiler: planet destroying]] land mine, planet-destroying]] landmine doesn't mean he will he'll pass on any opportunity to snark on [[BigBad Villengard's]] inhumane business practises.
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* Just because The Doctor is standing on a [[spoiler: planet destroying]] land mine, doesn't mean he will pass on any opportunity to snark on [[BigBad Villengard's]] inhumane business practises.
--> Ruby: Why does a land mine have lights on it?
--> The Doctor: Oh... capitalism. Flashy lights play well in a showroom. Modern warfare - death by salesman.
[[indent:20:''a little later on'']]
--> The Doctor: It's vacuum drones, that's all. Hoovering up the smoke, so that nobody can choke to death before [[DeadpanSnarker they are safely shot]].
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** The slow creeping FlatWhat faces on The Doctor and Ruby as they realize how bad the songs are. By the time they hear the orchestra playing "Three Blind Mice", The Doctor is hunched over and [[NoJustNoReaction close to hyper-ventilating]].
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-->'''The Doctor:'''I'm sorry, Poppy, I'm so sorry, but we are not your mummy and daddy. I wish we were -
-->'''Ruby:''' [[ThroatSlittingGesture *pulls her hand over throat, grimacing*]]
-->'''Ruby:''' [[ThroatSlittingGesture *pulls her hand over throat, grimacing*]]
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-->'''The Doctor:'''I'm Doctor:''' I'm sorry, Poppy, I'm so sorry, but we are not your mummy and daddy. I wish we were -
-->'''Ruby:''' [[ThroatSlittingGesture *pulls her hand over her throat, grimacing*]]
-->'''Ruby:''' [[ThroatSlittingGesture *pulls her hand over her throat, grimacing*]]
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* While talking to the babies, the Doctor says he wishes he and Ruby were the babies' parents, and Ruby is not pleased.
-->'''The Doctor:'''I'm sorry, Poppy, I'm so sorry, but we are not your mummy and daddy. I wish we were -
-->'''Ruby:''' [[ThroatSlittingGesture *pulls her hand over throat, grimacing*]]
-->'''The Doctor:''' - but we're not.
-->'''The Doctor:'''I'm sorry, Poppy, I'm so sorry, but we are not your mummy and daddy. I wish we were -
-->'''Ruby:''' [[ThroatSlittingGesture *pulls her hand over throat, grimacing*]]
-->'''The Doctor:''' - but we're not.
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* During the finale dance number, [[spoiler: Henry Arbinger]] peeks out from a doorway with a mix of confusion and disdain at the entire spectacle.
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* Ruby slips over and gets some goop dripped on her head from a pipe. She proceeds to gag, complain how disgusting the goop is, and then [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking complain that the Doctor addressed her as "Rubes"]].
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* Ruby slips over and [[CoveredInGunge gets some goop dripped on her head from a pipe.pipe]]. She proceeds to gag, complain how disgusting the goop is, and then [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking complain that the Doctor addressed her as "Rubes"]].
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* Ruby slips over and gets some goop dripped on her head from a pipe. She proceeds to gag, complain how disgusting the goop is, and then [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking complain that the Doctor addressed her as "Rubes"]].
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* The slowly dawning horror as Ruby discovers the spaceship dripped ''[[{{Squick}} baby snot]]'' - from which the ''[[{{Pun}} Bogeyman]]'' is made - all over her head. The Doctor can't help but laugh at her misfortune.
--> '''Ruby:''' This is the ''worst'' thing that has ''ever happened'' to ''anyone''![[note]]Oh, Ruby. [[TearJerker/DoctorWho If only]] [[NightmareFuel/DoctorWho you knew]] how wrong you were.[[/note]]
--> '''Ruby:''' This is the ''worst'' thing that has ''ever happened'' to ''anyone''![[note]]Oh, Ruby. [[TearJerker/DoctorWho If only]] [[NightmareFuel/DoctorWho you knew]] how wrong you were.[[/note]]
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* Ruby asks the Doctor if the babies are incubated and grown as ''[[CrossesTheLineTwice food]]'', leading the Doctor to issue a BigWhat, followed by a NoJustNo reaction.
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* The Doctor almost misses Ruby being kidnapped. Why? Because he gets the show's music confused with The Maestro's in-universe entrance.
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* The Doctor almost misses Ruby being kidnapped. Why? [[BreakingTheFourthWall Because he gets the show's music confused with The Maestro's in-universe entrance.
entrance]].
-->'''The Doctor:''' I thought that wasnon-diagetic!non-diegetic!
-->'''The Doctor:''' I thought that was
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* The Doctor almost misses Ruby being kidnapped. Why? Because he gets the show's music confused with The Maestro's in-unverse in-universe entrance.
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* The Doctor almost misses Ruby being kidnapped. Why? Because he gets the show's music confused with The Maestro's in-unverse entrance.
-->'''The Doctor:''' I thought that was non-diagetic!
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* Ruby briefly causes a ButterflyOfDoom effect when she steps on a butterfly, momentarily turning her into a reptilian alien.
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* Ruby briefly causes a ButterflyOfDoom effect when she steps on a butterfly, momentarily turning her into a reptilian alien.humanoid.
* The Nan-E filter censors swearing using GoshDangItToHeck, and the euphemisms make it very clear what the original words were, to hilarious effect.
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* The StylisticSuck of the alternate Abbey Road Studios where all the music has been stolen by The Maestro. Music/TheBeatles sing about a dog, Cilla Black sings a generic love song, and an orchestra plays a ''horrifically'' dissonant rendition of "Three Blind Mice".
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* The StylisticSuck of the alternate Abbey Road Studios where all the music has been stolen by The Maestro. Music/TheBeatles sing about a dog, Cilla Black sings a generic love song, and an orchestra plays a ''horrifically'' dissonant rendition of "Three Blind Mice".
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-->'''Alt!Ruby:''' What's wrong? Did I do something wrong? Because I am Rubathon Blue of the 57th Hemisphere Hatchlings, and I do not do wrong things, Doc''tah''.
-->'''The Doctor:''' But--
-->'''Alt!Ruby:''' If you made an incorrect accusation, I ''will'' have to kill you.
-->'''The Doctor:''' But--
-->'''Alt!Ruby:''' If you made an incorrect accusation, I ''will'' have to kill you.
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-->'''Paul [=McCartney=]:''' "I've got a dog, he's called Fred.
-->My dog is alive, he's not dead.
-->I love my dog, he loves me too.
-->I haven't got a cat, only a dog."
-->'''Cilla Black:''' "I love you, you love me.
-->We are two, we are not three.
-->'Cause you love me and I love you.
-->We're quite happy, I think, perhaps."
-->My dog is alive, he's not dead.
-->I love my dog, he loves me too.
-->I haven't got a cat, only a dog."
-->'''Cilla Black:''' "I love you, you love me.
-->We are two, we are not three.
-->'Cause you love me and I love you.
-->We're quite happy, I think, perhaps."
